The song has a powerful and poignant feel to it. You’ve done well at telling your story and communicating your message here. Vocals: - You’ve got a unique voice, it’s somewhat reminiscent of Eddie Vedder from Pearl Jam. - Your vocal melodies are kept interesting by your constantly changing lyrics. You’ve got a good knack for storytelling. - I can hear room to experiment with vocal harmonies and backing vocals. I think they would help support the main melody and add an interesting dynamic. Production and Mix: - Your acoustic guitar playing feels like the backbone of the track, it’s always there and sets the tone for the rest - The Online Recording Studio